April March Experimental Edits

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Tried doing some new stuff.

#2

they all look the same because they are all cliche edgy
10/10 tho

#5

ALLAH/JESUS/BUDDHA/GOD INCARNATE!!!

Are they fit for wallpaper use? Cuz I think they’re fit for wallpaper use!

#6

in your “oryx” edit:

power,created

no space

meanwhile,in the

no space

thinking the people in oryx’s realm hostile

forgot a “were” in there, I know it’s possible to make that work without one but that sentence sounds bizarre

invisable

invisible*

destroying everything in site

destroying everything in sight*

he cast a spell to shatter the souls

their*

time,the

no space again

archer shot her bow

archer is male

invisable

invisible* again

also half the block is really hard to follow in some places, it looks totally awesome but the text desperately needs some work.

#7

copied directly from realm eye :stuck_out_tongue:

#8

well if that’s the case…
whoever wrote that desperately needs to fix it.

#9

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