Dungeon Idea - Palace

#1

A little dungeon idea i had, feedback would be much appreciated
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#2

It looks like you’re using a format but haven’t yet deleted the format after creating the product. Could you please do so? It would make it look overall more clean and intereting.
Thanks

love all your 16* 16 sprites but I find yout 8* 8 sprites lacking

#3

Like Leohe I really think you need to go through the document and remove the format placeholders, I personally can’t follow the doc with it there. While you’re removing all of the placeholder text you should expand upon the enemy and boss descriptions and behaviors.

Your sprites need work, some of them in there look okay but the majority look really odd in my opinion, the 88 minions need shading and their shape needs to be changed, and your 1616 s need to be worked on a little too, although they are better than the 8*8s. Pretty much the only sprite I personally liked in there was the vine, I thought that looked pretty decent, the other sprites need some work on shape, animation, and colouring/shading.

good luck on your dungeon!

#4

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