Fan story about Oryx

#1

DefenseMad.
So I tried to write about a story that take place before Oryx get mad and all begins, I did the draws and the story, is not fisnish yet because I want to see if you guys want to finish it or change something. My english is not perfect so tell me if there is something wrong.

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This is what I’ve done till now, and I want to know if:

  • Finish it
  • Let it die here.

0 voters

Thanks you all.

#2

it’s pretty cool.
might want to check your grammar though

#3

All hell broke looses and everyone died the end

#4

No lol

#5

Okay as I continued throughout the story I got pretty damn confused on what was going on… So Oryx was a villager and his mom died to some demon?

#6

Needs more CraigxOryx action. I’ll start on the fanfic if you aren’t willing.

#7

I was trying to write a “before story” about nexus like who was Oryx, where did he came from and how did he meet Craig and why they are friends. There is a lot more, the pics here are like just talking about how begun the problem, there are thousand of thing that I have to add but I just wanted to know if ppl wanted me to finish it. What I mean is, the story will explain all.

#8

I never read a single word but i saw you put cool backgrounds on each page…so I decided to give it a like. :blush:

#9

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