Skysplitter Sword

#1

Hey, so this is my first fan art. It looks really bad, because I used paint. But yeah, so give me some criticism.

#2

interesting, but it would be better if you colored inside the lines.

#3

Looks like glass

#4

“Little Johnny, remember to color inside the lines on your drawing!”

#5

it was hard coloring accurately kek

#6

No I think it looks better with the coloring outside the lines. This makes the art style more unique, at least to me.

#7

It’s not bad, but the section in the middle of the blade should not extend up the whole way.

#8

im not sure if there is, but i think there may be a fill in the box thing

#9

yea, but that left some bubbles lol

#10

coloring can be a lot neater. erase/delete the lines for scaffolding

try to make the yellow more “detailed”. what i mean by this is basically add shades of orange, gray, etc into it. blends the colors better and adds the magnificent:

“SHADING”

#11

Step 1) draw the outlines ( good )
2) choose colour ( good )
3) colour inside lines ( need improvement )

#12

7/10

#13

borders -trigger’d-

#14

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