I’m not a big fan of the repetitive combination of two words (realitylapse, darkquartz, blastsmith, mindwaster, etc). It works a couple of times, but it gets old after seeing it 20 times (not counting Orclands or words that exist naturally).
The descriptions, while very detailed, don’t really fit in. Some of them have odd lore, such as magma dragons and Sulfurous Realms.
Additionally, the flowery vocabulary you use adds to the charm of these items, but it doesn’t align itself with the “simple” descriptions already present in the game. Take the Demon Blade, for example - “A swift and hungry blade that is never satisfied with just one kill.” I think it would be nice for you to try to imitate this type of writing, which makes the item sound interesting while still being easy to digest. The Scepter of Luminous Winds, for instance, has a beautiful description, but I get lost in what it actually means. What are the “mortal realms?” How did “cleaving the infinite aether into a tremendous starstorm” create these realms?
I love the imagination you put into this work, but at times it seems overdone. The use of elaborate sentences, while refreshing a few times, shouldn’t be done excessively.